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Publishers 'missing a trick' with blurbs
11.06.10 | Victoria Gallagher
Publishers are "missing a trick" by not perfecting blurbs on jackets despite the fact they are "commercially valuable", delegates were told at The Bookseller Cover Design Conference yesterday. The importance of blurb and other copy on book jackets was highlighted at the conference held yesterday (10th June) at The British Library Conference Center, and attended by 200 delegates.
James Spackman, sales and trade marketing director at Hodder & Stoughton, said: "There is time and effort and strife that goes into finishes, foil and shine, etc - but think about how many books are sold online these days and this means nothing. We're missing a trick." He added: "The words are commercially valuable . . . We can afford to be positive about this, we have a chance to add value."
Spackman discussed research from Book Marketing Limited which found that the blurb makes 62% of consumers buy a particular book. He added: "It's a vital motivating factor in why people decide to buy a book and it is totally in control of the publisher."
Spackman flagged up titles where he believed the copy had significantly improved the sales of a book. He said the blurb on The Other Hand by Chris Cleave "represents a bold new view of how much content needs to go in". The title addressed the reader directly but did not give much away about the storyline therefore "unsettling the reader" said Spackman.
He too highlighted The Book Thief by Markus Zusak, Twilight by Stephenie Meyer and Wolf Hall by Hilary Mantel as three titles which work well by doing things differently.
Publishing consultant Damian Horner added: "We should not underestimate [blurb]. No matter how beautiful our cover designs are, at some point they will turn it over and then either put it back on the shelf or buy it."



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I remember hearing (maybe at last year's conference?) that a potential reader's engagement with a book is a little like speed dating - and you only get a matter of seconds to grab attention. The cover is like checking out the potential date - looks, clothes, general impression - and then the blurb is like the initial chat up line. If that doesn't work, the reader will quickly move on to the next one. Interesting analogy!
I always read the blurb, even if I've already bought the book or borrowed it from the library. Its like watching the trailer for a movie; it whets the appetite. Everytime I've bought a book by an author I don't normally follow, its because the book has a good blurb and good hook on the first page. Even books on amazon benefit from a description and sneak peaks.
It's 2010 and a publisher states that writing a good blurb is important. Have I been missing something?
Only if a publisher has paid for a face-out listing will the blurb be effective. Even so, most blurbs are on the inside of the dust-jacket, or on the back of the d.j. The alternative is shelf-talkers. But there, too, booksellers, whether bibbox or indy are resistant to these becasue too many of them can make a bookstore look like a supermarket, with their blinking light, sensor-activated gizmos that spit out a coupon to the shopper passing by.
Blurb or no blurb, face-out or no face-out, most books are still sold from the shelves - the fabled 'long tail' we hear so much about. This being so, UK publishers need to put more effort into the spines, especially with non-fiction. It's no good calling a travel book 'Among the Spinach Groves' if you don't specify which country's groves you're talking about, or calling a biography 'The Man Who Liked Meringue' if you don't mention, even in very small type, the actual name of the subject. American publishers do this kind of thing so much better. Obviously it's a bit more difficult with fiction, but there's no reason why mini-blurbs couldn't be squeezed onto spines, something to lead people in as they scan the shelves, rather than leaving them to guess for themselves what it could be about.
Blurbs on spine would be a bit of a step, but the tradition of not including the subtitle on the spine is probably something to look at again. Be interesting to see a list of some of the books that people consider great but have not sold, and to look at why.
Agree with Coningsby as regards spines - but its difficult with only so much real estate to play with. The best you can hope for is an attention grabber - to get them to read the title at least. Our black & yellow 'hazard tape' seems to work and ties into the title nicely. One UK (V. small) publisher putting 'more effort' into the non-fiction backbone.
View at twfire.com
A blurb is nowadays so much more than some text on the back of a book. It's a pice of content and writing it demands real skill. A good blurb writer (usually an editor, who although experts in their own right, often don't make great writers themselves) should be considering how this content is going to be used. One use will be on the back of a book and I agree with the majority here. Across all genres, the landscape is increasingly competitive. For someone to part with their hard-earned cash for a book, particularly in-store, the cover (look and feel) and textures have to sing in harmony. So many people browse in store and buy online now that this is increasingly important. The blurb may have to be so impactful, its memory can survive the journey home! The blurb is also used in the metadata "synopsis" or "description" fields for online retail and here, this, moreso than the cover (which probably doesn't look as good online as in the flesh), is your shot at convincing someone to purchase. In digital marketing, we A-B test everything, why wouldn't you do that with blurbs? You could make a keword-rich, optimized but readable blurb as well as one which is pure literature and see which performs better. Can the description aid the search? Probably. With the rise of the iBook store, editors should be looking to music and apps so see how the best performing products are sold in that environment. There are learnings for sure. So, new skills are probably needed and a new approach should be embraced. Like I said, a blurb is not just a pice of text on a book jacket anymore.
Having written a blurb once to help a friend, I quite agree with the wizard: they are horrendously difficult, like trying to compress 'Paradise Lost' into haiku form. So far as online searches go, and in-store databases, I think it's much more useful if the information is in the title. Continuum's 'Newman's Unquiet Grave' is a good example of this - it's got Newman's name in it, which is certainly the right way to start, but someone in 3 years' time who has forgotten the precise title, and just puts in 'John Henry Newman' (as he is still best known), wouldn't find it at all. A better title, I think, would be something like 'The Unquiet Grave: A New Life of John Henry Newman' ... Firekat's point about the lack of space on spines is well-made, especially considering the average width of 'literary' novels. Perhaps a single word would suffice: "Brilliant!" (Auchtermuchty Clarion) ... Downbythebeach opens a huge subject, which would keep a team of postgrads happily employed for months: all other things being equal, why do some books sell better than others? I have a hunch, although I have no way of demonstrating this, that authors called Aardvark and Zuckerman start at a heavy disadvantage, since most browsers, when confronted with a wall of fiction shelves, will notice books at eye-level first, and will probably start somewhere in the middle anyway. They'll also go to their favourite authors, just on the off-chance there's something new. Here alphabetical serendipity comes in: a writer of conspiracy-themed adventures called, say, Browning, or of fantasy humour novels called Pratleigh, has a priceless head-start in the unsmiling Darwinism of the shelves. Is it a co-incidence that so many horror writers cluster round Steven King, as if for protection? Koontz, Herbert, Lovecraft? Perhaps it is. I should re-emphasise here that a good book will always sell - Austen and Zafon immediately disprove my theory of bibliopolar disorder - but for first-time or mid-list authors, where they sit on the shelf may well prove as important in the long term as that yearned-for place on the front of store table.
Jason - a good point and thanks for the link. Interestingly on the link you provided most of the commentators were put off by the blurb and the letter from the editor - but most of them read the book anyway to see if it lived up to the hype. In this case the blurb and editor's letter seem to have done the job of selling the book and getting it read. The fact the most agreed it didn't live up to the hype suggests a marketing problem for Chris Cleave's next book. I don't think the line 'His last book didn't quite meet your expectations but this one really will' is going to work.
As an author, I have certainly spent time thinking about my blurb even if my publisher/editor hasn't. What I would like to see is the blurb then consistently used by online booksellers. In a shop you can actually pick up the book and turn it over but online the blurb is often missing, especially with newer authors and smaller publishers, which is odd when you consider that this is the information which will be selling it! How can the buyer know if this is the book they want? I don't know if this is the fault of the publishers or the sellers.
This is part of the wider problem of publishers not being very good at marketing their books. I assumed in the past that this was because they expected the retailers to do much of that for them, but things have changed. I have been put off from buying books (online) for one or more of the following reasons: no blurb; inaccurate publication dates; no series information (which series is the book in? What number in the series is it?) to name but a few. This is basic information that should be available well ahead of publication and disseminated to the online retailers. A final point: I really hate it when the jacket is used to sell the book by including quotes from reviews of previous books or editions. I can see the point on posters but please, not on the cover itself. It can ruin what is a beautiful piece of design.
I always find that blurbs either give too much away, or are more about hard sell than giving an overview of what it's about.
It's amazing though, how many books don't even have a blurb at all...that's a sure sign that I won't be buying the book!!
I often find blurbs misleading. I rely heavily on blurbs- especially in my job as a school librarian, where I'm selecting on behalf of young people. The book group I belong to has selected certain titles based on the blurbs, only to be disappointed with the content of the book. Either the blurb writers are very good at dressing things up, or they haven't read it all the way through.
Anyway, please accept this as a plea to all blurb writers to include enough accuracy to inform and entice. Book without blurbs usually don't make it into my 'shopping basket'.
@ Jason, I diagree. When browsing for the third book during my ritual '3 for 2' buying habit, I read the blurb for 'The Other Hand' without ever having heared about the book before then. The blurb made me want to know more, and I ended up buying it and really liking the book. I commend Spackman for picking up on this. To be honest though, realising the blurb is important for book sales should not be a new realisation. It reflects the publishing industry and how slow we all are to focus on the commerciality of our business.
Blurb for 'The Other Hand' (August 08):
We don't want to tell you too much about this book. It is a truly special story and we don't want to spoil it. Nevertheless, you need to know something, so we will just say this:
It is extremely funny, but the African beach scene is horrific.
The story starts there, but the book doesn't.
And it's what happens afterwards that is most important.
Once you have read it, you'll want to tell everyone about it. When you do, please don't tell them what happens either. The magic is in how it unfolds.
Blurb for 'The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas' (Feb 07):
The story of "The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas" is very difficult to describe. Usually we give some clues about the book on the cover, but in this case we think that would spoil the reading of the book. We think it is important that you start to read without knowing what it is about. If you do start to read this book, you will go on a journey with a nine-year-old boy called Bruno. (Though this isn't a book for nine-year-olds.) And sooner or later you will arrive with Bruno at a fence. We hope you never have to cross such a fence.
I hope Mr Speckman acknowledged his debt to 'The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas' in his brave new view on book blurbs.
@ Pedantic Ass - Yes, James Spackman did indeed acknowledge the similarity but had been assured by his colleagues at Hodder that they were unaware of the similarity at the time.
Ass - that's a good spot. However does it not just prove the point? Both books were very successful using the same approach to blurb writing. What I'd like to see is an example of this style of blurb writing that has failed.
@Matthew: my somewhat facetious comment was directed at me percieving Speckman as blowing his publisher's trumpet with the bold new blurb direction when it's been done before. As @Sally has said however, Speckman has acknowledged the previous blurb, so he has retained his honour. Good show!
And as for seeing a blurb like this with a book that's failed, it might be difficult to find. You need a certain amount of confidence that your book will be a hit to do that kind of blurb, and if you've got that then there is usually a good reason why.
I thought the blurb on the back of "The Other Hand" was dreadful. Surely "unsettling the reader" is the last thing you want to do
I thought the blurb on the back of "The Other Hand" was dreadful. Surely "unsettling the reader" is the last thing you want to do
I remember hearing (maybe at last year's conference?) that a potential reader's engagement with a book is a little like speed dating - and you only get a matter of seconds to grab attention. The cover is like checking out the potential date - looks, clothes, general impression - and then the blurb is like the initial chat up line. If that doesn't work, the reader will quickly move on to the next one. Interesting analogy!
I always read the blurb, even if I've already bought the book or borrowed it from the library. Its like watching the trailer for a movie; it whets the appetite. Everytime I've bought a book by an author I don't normally follow, its because the book has a good blurb and good hook on the first page. Even books on amazon benefit from a description and sneak peaks.
It's 2010 and a publisher states that writing a good blurb is important. Have I been missing something?
Only if a publisher has paid for a face-out listing will the blurb be effective. Even so, most blurbs are on the inside of the dust-jacket, or on the back of the d.j. The alternative is shelf-talkers. But there, too, booksellers, whether bibbox or indy are resistant to these becasue too many of them can make a bookstore look like a supermarket, with their blinking light, sensor-activated gizmos that spit out a coupon to the shopper passing by.
Blurb or no blurb, face-out or no face-out, most books are still sold from the shelves - the fabled 'long tail' we hear so much about. This being so, UK publishers need to put more effort into the spines, especially with non-fiction. It's no good calling a travel book 'Among the Spinach Groves' if you don't specify which country's groves you're talking about, or calling a biography 'The Man Who Liked Meringue' if you don't mention, even in very small type, the actual name of the subject. American publishers do this kind of thing so much better. Obviously it's a bit more difficult with fiction, but there's no reason why mini-blurbs couldn't be squeezed onto spines, something to lead people in as they scan the shelves, rather than leaving them to guess for themselves what it could be about.
Blurbs on spine would be a bit of a step, but the tradition of not including the subtitle on the spine is probably something to look at again. Be interesting to see a list of some of the books that people consider great but have not sold, and to look at why.
Agree with Coningsby as regards spines - but its difficult with only so much real estate to play with. The best you can hope for is an attention grabber - to get them to read the title at least. Our black & yellow 'hazard tape' seems to work and ties into the title nicely. One UK (V. small) publisher putting 'more effort' into the non-fiction backbone.
View at twfire.com
A blurb is nowadays so much more than some text on the back of a book. It's a pice of content and writing it demands real skill. A good blurb writer (usually an editor, who although experts in their own right, often don't make great writers themselves) should be considering how this content is going to be used. One use will be on the back of a book and I agree with the majority here. Across all genres, the landscape is increasingly competitive. For someone to part with their hard-earned cash for a book, particularly in-store, the cover (look and feel) and textures have to sing in harmony. So many people browse in store and buy online now that this is increasingly important. The blurb may have to be so impactful, its memory can survive the journey home! The blurb is also used in the metadata "synopsis" or "description" fields for online retail and here, this, moreso than the cover (which probably doesn't look as good online as in the flesh), is your shot at convincing someone to purchase. In digital marketing, we A-B test everything, why wouldn't you do that with blurbs? You could make a keword-rich, optimized but readable blurb as well as one which is pure literature and see which performs better. Can the description aid the search? Probably. With the rise of the iBook store, editors should be looking to music and apps so see how the best performing products are sold in that environment. There are learnings for sure. So, new skills are probably needed and a new approach should be embraced. Like I said, a blurb is not just a pice of text on a book jacket anymore.
Having written a blurb once to help a friend, I quite agree with the wizard: they are horrendously difficult, like trying to compress 'Paradise Lost' into haiku form. So far as online searches go, and in-store databases, I think it's much more useful if the information is in the title. Continuum's 'Newman's Unquiet Grave' is a good example of this - it's got Newman's name in it, which is certainly the right way to start, but someone in 3 years' time who has forgotten the precise title, and just puts in 'John Henry Newman' (as he is still best known), wouldn't find it at all. A better title, I think, would be something like 'The Unquiet Grave: A New Life of John Henry Newman' ... Firekat's point about the lack of space on spines is well-made, especially considering the average width of 'literary' novels. Perhaps a single word would suffice: "Brilliant!" (Auchtermuchty Clarion) ... Downbythebeach opens a huge subject, which would keep a team of postgrads happily employed for months: all other things being equal, why do some books sell better than others? I have a hunch, although I have no way of demonstrating this, that authors called Aardvark and Zuckerman start at a heavy disadvantage, since most browsers, when confronted with a wall of fiction shelves, will notice books at eye-level first, and will probably start somewhere in the middle anyway. They'll also go to their favourite authors, just on the off-chance there's something new. Here alphabetical serendipity comes in: a writer of conspiracy-themed adventures called, say, Browning, or of fantasy humour novels called Pratleigh, has a priceless head-start in the unsmiling Darwinism of the shelves. Is it a co-incidence that so many horror writers cluster round Steven King, as if for protection? Koontz, Herbert, Lovecraft? Perhaps it is. I should re-emphasise here that a good book will always sell - Austen and Zafon immediately disprove my theory of bibliopolar disorder - but for first-time or mid-list authors, where they sit on the shelf may well prove as important in the long term as that yearned-for place on the front of store table.
Jason - a good point and thanks for the link. Interestingly on the link you provided most of the commentators were put off by the blurb and the letter from the editor - but most of them read the book anyway to see if it lived up to the hype. In this case the blurb and editor's letter seem to have done the job of selling the book and getting it read. The fact the most agreed it didn't live up to the hype suggests a marketing problem for Chris Cleave's next book. I don't think the line 'His last book didn't quite meet your expectations but this one really will' is going to work.
As an author, I have certainly spent time thinking about my blurb even if my publisher/editor hasn't. What I would like to see is the blurb then consistently used by online booksellers. In a shop you can actually pick up the book and turn it over but online the blurb is often missing, especially with newer authors and smaller publishers, which is odd when you consider that this is the information which will be selling it! How can the buyer know if this is the book they want? I don't know if this is the fault of the publishers or the sellers.
This is part of the wider problem of publishers not being very good at marketing their books. I assumed in the past that this was because they expected the retailers to do much of that for them, but things have changed. I have been put off from buying books (online) for one or more of the following reasons: no blurb; inaccurate publication dates; no series information (which series is the book in? What number in the series is it?) to name but a few. This is basic information that should be available well ahead of publication and disseminated to the online retailers. A final point: I really hate it when the jacket is used to sell the book by including quotes from reviews of previous books or editions. I can see the point on posters but please, not on the cover itself. It can ruin what is a beautiful piece of design.
I always find that blurbs either give too much away, or are more about hard sell than giving an overview of what it's about.
It's amazing though, how many books don't even have a blurb at all...that's a sure sign that I won't be buying the book!!
I often find blurbs misleading. I rely heavily on blurbs- especially in my job as a school librarian, where I'm selecting on behalf of young people. The book group I belong to has selected certain titles based on the blurbs, only to be disappointed with the content of the book. Either the blurb writers are very good at dressing things up, or they haven't read it all the way through.
Anyway, please accept this as a plea to all blurb writers to include enough accuracy to inform and entice. Book without blurbs usually don't make it into my 'shopping basket'.
@ Jason, I diagree. When browsing for the third book during my ritual '3 for 2' buying habit, I read the blurb for 'The Other Hand' without ever having heared about the book before then. The blurb made me want to know more, and I ended up buying it and really liking the book. I commend Spackman for picking up on this. To be honest though, realising the blurb is important for book sales should not be a new realisation. It reflects the publishing industry and how slow we all are to focus on the commerciality of our business.
Blurb for 'The Other Hand' (August 08):
We don't want to tell you too much about this book. It is a truly special story and we don't want to spoil it. Nevertheless, you need to know something, so we will just say this:
It is extremely funny, but the African beach scene is horrific.
The story starts there, but the book doesn't.
And it's what happens afterwards that is most important.
Once you have read it, you'll want to tell everyone about it. When you do, please don't tell them what happens either. The magic is in how it unfolds.
Blurb for 'The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas' (Feb 07):
The story of "The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas" is very difficult to describe. Usually we give some clues about the book on the cover, but in this case we think that would spoil the reading of the book. We think it is important that you start to read without knowing what it is about. If you do start to read this book, you will go on a journey with a nine-year-old boy called Bruno. (Though this isn't a book for nine-year-olds.) And sooner or later you will arrive with Bruno at a fence. We hope you never have to cross such a fence.
I hope Mr Speckman acknowledged his debt to 'The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas' in his brave new view on book blurbs.
@ Pedantic Ass - Yes, James Spackman did indeed acknowledge the similarity but had been assured by his colleagues at Hodder that they were unaware of the similarity at the time.
Ass - that's a good spot. However does it not just prove the point? Both books were very successful using the same approach to blurb writing. What I'd like to see is an example of this style of blurb writing that has failed.
@Matthew: my somewhat facetious comment was directed at me percieving Speckman as blowing his publisher's trumpet with the bold new blurb direction when it's been done before. As @Sally has said however, Speckman has acknowledged the previous blurb, so he has retained his honour. Good show!
And as for seeing a blurb like this with a book that's failed, it might be difficult to find. You need a certain amount of confidence that your book will be a hit to do that kind of blurb, and if you've got that then there is usually a good reason why.